jake2034's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Record Tripping]

Amazing! All of it!

The overall concept is good, and completely original. I love how it's the audio book for Alice and Wonderland on the turn table. The scenery is beautiful, and the chapters are neat, and always different than the last. I find the Mac detection to be cool, although I don't know why it's necessary.

So, all-in-all this is a marvelous game that deserves to be on the front page for this long. Keep up the good work guys!

[Underdog!!]

i think the Frames per second should be brought up

Mainly just so it plays faster, but other than that, it's a good game.

[Virtual Handgun]

Wow

This is quality work. With amazing detail, simple way to use it, and good sound.
I have some suggestions for a follow up:
-Possibly upgraades, like extended clips, silencers, and style upgrades (like a pimped look in army of two) that's bought through exchanging shots fired for the upgrades.
-different weapons, like a mini-uzi, scorpion, etc.
-I'd suggest keeping to smaller weapons because assault rifles always look weird for these types of 'games'

Hope this helps.
Thank you for an amazing submission.

[Cursor Maze]

Hard... But in a good way.

Better than only the 2 levels you postted before. Get more progress..... then post only one more... and then the final product, k?

sknight responds:

Im planning to mass product levels now so i should have a final game up in a few days :]
[btw, since you played the other one and this one, i added you to the "testers" in the credits]

[Tower Defence War]

I spent too much time dude!

I got to the end of a map.... all my towers disappeared and no more waves came dude.... Is that a bad thing? I'll PM you a photo of it if you want.... Meh, I'll do it anyways.

iovo responds:

This is still in developing progress. Will be fixed in final version

[The Bug Game]

Incomplete feeling...

It just seems like it's not quite done. Like there should be more to it. It's a bit too easy, and way too short. But different. And the up and down thing is new, although a bit confusing at first. Maybe The Bug Game 2 will have more to offer? *wink* *wink*

[The Scale of the Universe]

Astounding!

Absolutely BRILLIANT! Not only did I learn more about our universe and all in it (as far as size goes) BUT I also ENJOYED it! Amazing presentation, and very well planned out. Soothing music too. And many hours of research it seems. (Maybe.. Could've been on one page, but I'll give you the BotD ;D)

Overall... ASTOUNDING!

[City Platformer]

Check Points! Plz?

Like I said, check points are a must. You have a good structure for a decent game. Graphics are not too bad. BUT, a story line would be good (you already had one going, but introduce it before the game play starts maybe? And instead of a training level, how about a "How To Play" page which explains everything, so that way there isn't so much in game text (it kinda bugged me). I have some other ideas to make it better... If you're interested, you can PM me, and I could even help you better it if you want?

NewAssasination11 responds:

there was a how to play in Help and you have a very helpful review so thank for the check point stuff

[SickDeath]

yes

sword was best!

[FLIC]

Prototype?

Is this the outcome of the prototype you submitted? Cuz if so, that's freakin awesome!!!! good game man!

Alcho responds:

Hey,

It wasnt the direct outcome of Extreme Pong Pong, but the two obviously have a similar pong feel.

I think Pong is a good game to create to get into developing games, now im going to be working on bigger and better things!

thanks for the review