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[Festival Girl]

It is Buggy.

Most of the items don't respond when you click on them, and sometimes they don't drag to the girl. Fix that, and it'll be better. (Although maybe it's made for IE instead of Fire Fox)

mita29 responds:

Some of the items ( Ie : lash, eyes, shadow, lips & accessories ) are meant to be dragged and dropped. The click able items are hairstyle (on the forehead), complexion, eyebrow & dress. Sorry for the confusion..

[Cursor Maze]

Hard... But in a good way.

Better than only the 2 levels you postted before. Get more progress..... then post only one more... and then the final product, k?

sknight responds:

Im planning to mass product levels now so i should have a final game up in a few days :]
[btw, since you played the other one and this one, i added you to the "testers" in the credits]

[Tower Defence War]

I spent too much time dude!

I got to the end of a map.... all my towers disappeared and no more waves came dude.... Is that a bad thing? I'll PM you a photo of it if you want.... Meh, I'll do it anyways.

iovo responds:

This is still in developing progress. Will be fixed in final version

[City Platformer]

Check Points! Plz?

Like I said, check points are a must. You have a good structure for a decent game. Graphics are not too bad. BUT, a story line would be good (you already had one going, but introduce it before the game play starts maybe? And instead of a training level, how about a "How To Play" page which explains everything, so that way there isn't so much in game text (it kinda bugged me). I have some other ideas to make it better... If you're interested, you can PM me, and I could even help you better it if you want?

NewAssasination11 responds:

there was a how to play in Help and you have a very helpful review so thank for the check point stuff

[FLIC]

Prototype?

Is this the outcome of the prototype you submitted? Cuz if so, that's freakin awesome!!!! good game man!

Alcho responds:

Hey,

It wasnt the direct outcome of Extreme Pong Pong, but the two obviously have a similar pong feel.

I think Pong is a good game to create to get into developing games, now im going to be working on bigger and better things!

thanks for the review

[The Pick of Destiny]

When will I be able to play the second one?

Dude, you need to hurry up and mak a second and third one, this was awesome! If you do make a 2nd and 3rd one follow this sort of storyline! Awesome songs, love the SSB songs. The 5th song was the hardest, but somehow I did great with this game. Please make some more!

LilDwarf responds:

I'll see haha thanks for liking this!

[Extreme Pong Pong]

it was decent

for a prototype, it was nice, it, just needs to be a little more extreme. good start thogh, i'll PM you an idea to make it more extreme.

Alcho responds:

Yeah, any ideas are welcome. The best will be put into the next game.

Thanks for the review!

[-Shooting Range-]

Very Good!

For a basic game, this was a well done game. The graphics weren't bad at all, I've seen shooting games where the gun is just an L shaped thing. The gun actually had detail to it! And I love how you used an actual arm, it was a nice touch!

[Airball]

not good

i didn't like this, make the screen bigger, and uhhh... oh yeah, DON'T SUCK!

Alphabit responds:

Those are mighty good pieces of shit... I mean; advice.
LOL.